Not gonna share my AO3 handle but I get a fair amount of praise for my stream of non-human consciousness bits so (if it’s your jam) I really encourage you to take a deep dive into sensory and processing differences between you and the animal you’re attempting to depict. Its fascinating (or I’m a huge nerd lol).

As a semi-related example, a dog can have difficulty seeing a yellow ball against green grass due to red-green colorblindness, so you could also write an angry epistolary to just get a blue fucking ball already because nobody can fucking see that Jared.