dvxzr@lemmy.world to Comic Strips@lemmy.world · 21 days agoChoose your own adventurelemmy.worldimagemessage-square28fedilinkarrow-up1756
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minus-squareSergio@slrpnk.netlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up10·21 days agoKiller comic. Last panel’s a little weak though. Maybe it should break the fourth wall, like the guy looks at the reader and is like: “This is causing all the world’s problems.”
minus-squareIlovethebomb@lemm.eelinkfedilinkarrow-up2·21 days agoI think removing the text bubble and just having the character’s shocked impression would be a good choice.
Killer comic. Last panel’s a little weak though. Maybe it should break the fourth wall, like the guy looks at the reader and is like: “This is causing all the world’s problems.”
Something like this?
Nice!
I think removing the text bubble and just having the character’s shocked impression would be a good choice.